Poetry
Travelling inspired me to revisit a decades dormant passion. In January 2019, a few days after returning from Peru, I attended a creative writing workshop. Given a prompt and 15 minutes to create a poem, I conjured up one of the most physically, mentally and emotionally challenging experiences of my life - trekking up Montaña Winikunka in the Peruvian Andes. That night the first draft of my poem 4 letters was born (below is the much edited final version).
Playing with poetry is at once introspective and therapeutic. An unapologetic voice years in the making.
If my words move you, please drop a comment. Gracias y disfruta.
4 letters
majestically She sits
on her Andean Throne
silently watching
as i breathlessly struggle,
determined to reach
Her daunting
5,036 meter Vista Point
they call Her
Montaña Winikunka
Montaña de Colores
Rainbow Mountain
i call Her
an Exquisite Piece
of La Madre Tierra
we are seven
plus our guide, john
who briefs us
this is no race
take your time
some will go quickly
others will fall behind
some will suffer
from soroche,
the debilitating
altitude sickness
listen to your body
hydrate often
need a horse
decide now
pace yourselves
take breaks as needed
i have agua de florida
& oxygen, if needed
when we reach the Vista Summit
only 20 minutes, not longer
it’s very dangerous
at that altitude
remember to enjoy the scenery
always respect the Mountain
one couple
opts for horseback
the rest of us
set off on foot
i begin my ascent
step by step
walk…hike…trek
my boots sinking their soles
into Her soil
tire…ache…pant
the effects of the altitude
slow-ly setting in
stop
my body needs rest
standing there
strangers pass by
some slow-ly
others rush-ed-ly
john’s voice
i take in the beauty
surrounding me
snowcapped peaks
alpacas grazing
in the distance
the fog
accompanying me
on my route
start anew
climb
trek slow-ly
ever so
slow-ly
hydrate but
offer HER first
chew ojas de coca
don’t stop…just walk
keep trek-king
plow ahead
pain…halt…loss
of oxygen
john offers agua de florida
that aromatic herbal concoction
used by shamans & curanderos
to cleanse
body – mind – spirit
deep-ly, with intention
my palms to nostrils
in-hale the flower water
re-peat
re-peat
re-peat
renewed
i restart my ascent
climb – stumble
over rocks
tread with caution
hike ahead
the poles help
don’t stop
you got this
wrap my head in hope
will myself to focus
but this chest hurts
fold…over my knees
pain…gasp…gasp…pain
fear…so much fear
stop
sit on this rock
take oxygen now
john sits with me
silence
gaze over my right
ahead to where
Her Peak comes into view
this shit is real
and She may not want me
seeds of doubt
take root
raw emotions
flood my mind
my past
creeping to the fore
you are not enough
never were you
good enough
tears
roll down my cheeks
them childhood insecurities
finding their unwelcome way beside me on this Mountain
to not summit
failure
unworthy
insignificant
it is proof
that truly i am not
good enough
just as i felt
as a little girl
we sit in brief silence
no empty words
to fill the cool air
i look up at Her
She whispers
Hear Me
Call Out Your Name
Feel Me
Draw in My Love
Touch Me
Give Me Your Pain
emotionally drained
physically exhausted
mentally spent
i know She awaits me
hike…walk…trek
climb
step…step…step
stop
2 hours and
24 minutes later
Her Vista Point Summit
Welcomes me
and still there are
4 letters
weep…deep pain
some more…calm wind
Her Arms
Hold me
Her Bosom
Comforts me
Welcome Home
My Warrior
so many tears
this time they carry
joy
re-lief
gratitude
vindication
they hold love
4 letters
cannot begin to express
the overwhelming feelings
of reaching Her Summit
free…
i am finally free
Hongera sana
asante sana, my brother 🙂 appreciate you dropping by.